David Garcia's Critique: HW 1


    Although this article discusses some points in design that are agreeable, it gets sidetracked. At the beginning, it converses about the new street signs in London, and then it directs the issue to major companies (car corporations , fast-food restaurants, chair companies, etc.). Of course the topic wasn't supposed to be just about the designs of the signals, it was about how people could make flaws in design. However the way Alice started this treatise made it seem like was proceeding with that subject. Though this side tracking does explain why Alice's review manifests a rant. She makes it seem that her opinion is everyone else's opinion. Sure she give few examples from other articles, but it's clear as day that it's based on her dislikes rather than popular opinion. The title should have been changed so it would be less misleading.

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